im going to rewrite the entire thing starting with chapter 16. if you read them give me a critique. thanks


Of Rings and Swords Ch 5-8CHAPTER 5 That is how I got the scar on my hand. Even to this day I can feel the pain and the blood running down my hand. I forgave John, but we were not the same together. We werent as close as we used to be. After that incident we spent another year practicing all we learned so that one day we could leave and make our own stories, but this scar is a reminder of my carelessness that day. Shane ended leaning on the back of his chair with a sigh.Of Rings and Swords Ch 5-8
Why are you telling us this now? Asked Terrance wanting to put all of the pieces together.
In time Terrance. Before
FAB
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Trapped in arrested development......
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I think my art sucks. and what you think?
ask your honest opinion, without saving any detail.
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**I'm not a artist, I just draw a lot**
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We stand at a crossroads, idolatry looms, traditional values in jeopardy, truth under siege, and virtue abandoned.
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... Tea.
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To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing.
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