im going to rewrite the entire thing starting with chapter 16. if you read them give me a critique. thanks


Of Rings and Swords Ch 5-8CHAPTER 5 That is how I got the scar on my hand. Even to this day I can feel the pain and the blood running down my hand. I forgave John, but we were not the same together. We werent as close as we used to be. After that incident we spent another year practicing all we learned so that one day we could leave and make our own stories, but this scar is a reminder of my carelessness that day. Shane ended leaning on the back of his chair with a sigh.Of Rings and Swords Ch 5-8
Why are you telling us this now? Asked Terrance wanting to put all of the pieces together.
In time Terrance. Before
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**I'm not a artist, I just draw a lot**
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You can find my portfolio here: [link]
Later,
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I'm buying lingerie in a dollar store. Please let me walk on my own and save my last shred of dignity. - Cassie Hack, Hack/Slash
Always strive for the unattainable. - Lockpick Bobblehead, Fallout 3
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~Will R.
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"El anticucho se hace de Corazón".
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Work Hard, Play Hard & Draw with style
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-There is no theory of evolution, just a list of creatures Chuck Norris allows to live.
-When Chuck Norris does a push up, he isnt lifting himself up, hes pushing the Earth down.
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